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Adult Thor and Tatsuki by ScreamingXAX Adult Thor and Tatsuki by ScreamingXAX
Me and a friend's beautiful couple <3
Thor is a cafe baker and a great cook! He learned to cook so he could make meals for his mother after she lost all interest in taking care of herself when they went through a tough time. Thor is a feminine guy who is cute and childish, but can get super serious and punch a guy OR GIRL if need be. He learned it was best to stick up for himself, but never could. He observed Nariko lacked assertion when she was beaten by Thor's father.
Tatsuki is an ex gang leader and the one who grew up and protected Thor from bullies before disappearing and coming back like a new person to befriend Thor again. He also suffered from abuse and could understand what Thor and Nariko had been through. Tatsuki belongs to TatsukiOnada 
Hello there! ^_^

Good points:

- Aww! These two looks cute with their noses touching, them blushing, and the cute background. (The frills add to the cuteness too! ^_^) What a good way to show LGBT+ love. :)

- I like the simple and effective cel shading and coloring on this. This type of shading is kind of appropriate for an artwork like this. :)


- There are some places that need shading like at the tuft of the hair. (Which is probably where the scalp is.

- Personally, I think it's weird how this artwork has a transparent background and I think it would look better with a white background. :)

Hope this helps! ^_^
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